Inquiry Three Reflective Letter

The challenge of this inquiry was everything. First we had to pick our medium. I think that everyone is too comfortable with text essays and I didn’t want to be too close to my comfort zone. The audio essay, I wouldn’t know where to begin. Would I record me like a video or just my voice and would it be weird if I played music or my roommate was making too much noise? Maybe next time I will work on an audio essay. So I chose a photography essay. I think I was still iffy with a camera and that my photos may not seem as artistic as others may want them to be, so I thought I would work on it some and get this third inquiry over with.

Second we had to find a story. Many of the other photo essays had a straight forward story like family gatherings or classes or just things lying around. How in the world were we supposed to connect this to ourselves and a larger social issue and successfully delivering it to an audience? While we were first hearing about inquiry three, I wanted to crawl in a hole.

That’s when it hit me. Do something kind of cliché but add a twist to it. Everyone has always talked about the magical “doors of opportunity” and how I just have to walk through them to be successful in life. During the initial proposal, I was just going to have an introduction and then the photos, but many of my peers were suggesting that I add captions that conveyed the message through each and every picture. I took their advice and I’m glad I did. It helped to make more sense of the different doors that I photographed and it really helped to cut down from all of the original photos. I think I started with way too many, took out the ones I didn’t like (they were the “ugly” doors or people were in my way), and then the quotes seemed to match to the final few.

Overall I really liked this inquiry. It could be labeled as my favorite but we haven’t begun inquiry four yet so I don’t want to get too caught up. I both liked and didn’t like the complete freedom of it but it allowed me to take something that I believe in and that I know that others have heard of, and make it into something that could be the push that others need to just walk through the doors and see what opportunities lie in store.

Inquiry Two Works Cited (MLA format)

1)            (Webpage Version) Papageorge, Tod. “WALKER EVANS AND ROBERT FRANK: AN ESSAY ON INFLUENCE.” PHOTOGRAPHY: THE MISSING CRITICSM. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Feb. 2013.<http://wphoto.pbworks.com/f/Papageorge_on_Evans_and_Frank.pdf&gt;

2)            “The economy after World War II – Switzerland – Information.” Switzerland’s information portal – Switzerland – Information. N.p., n.d. Web. 20 Feb. 2013.http://www.swissworld.org/en/history/the_20th_century/the_economy_after_world_war_ii/

3)            “Dadaism – Styles & Movements – Art in the Picture.com.” Art in the Picture.com – An introduction to art history. N.p., n.d. Web. 24 Feb. 2013. http://www.artinthepicture.com/styles/Dadaism/

4)            “Dadaism.” Student Personal World Wide Web Pages . University of Southern California, n.d. Web. 24 Feb. 2013. < http://www-scf.usc.edu/~sniles/dadaism.htm&gt;

5)            Henri Cartier-Bresson, 1908-2004 Photo Gallery by Oleg Moiseyenko’s Stock Photography at pbase.com.” PBase.com. N.p., n.d. Web. 4 Mar. 2013.http://www.pbase.com/omoses/cartier_bresson

6)            “10 Things Henri Cartier-Bresson Can Teach You About Street Photography — Eric Kim Street Photography.” Eric Kim : International Street Photographer. N.p., n.d. Web. 4 Mar. 2013. http://erickimphotography.com/blog/2011/08/10-things-henri-cartier-bresson-can-teach-you-about-street-photography/

7)            “Walker Evans / Biography & Images – Atget Photography.com.” Atget Photography.com . N.p., n.d. Web. 4 Mar. 2013. http://www.atgetphotography.com/The-Photographers/Walker-Evans.html

8)            Frank, Robert. The Americans. Gottingen: Steidl, 2008. Print.

Inquiry Two Reflective Letter

My research was to find a general idea of what Robert Frank went through as he traveled through life. It began with a paper that listed several ideas that Robert got his inspiration from and I thought that I wanted to follow those leads to solve my questions of The Americans. Usually my papers had specific questions that had to be answered so I would look for sources that specifically answered them. It wasn’t fun or interesting at all, by the second source I was ready to B.S. the entire thing (and I still did pretty well). This research paper, I was allowed to answer the questions that I had, not the ones that everyone were forced to answer. I got to look into things that interested me and I think that it really made this paper stand out among all of the others in my profile.

In this inquiry, I had to document my research with the blogs. I found this very helpful and I am planning on continuing it with any of the other papers that I will have to write in the future. I was able to note the points and keep everything super organized which made it so much easier to write the actual paper. Since it was so organized I was also able to do the work cited page in seconds and that allowed my in text quotations to be sourced easier as well. I didn’t have to go looking through all of my sources for the quotation so it saved me a lot of time and headaches as well. I don’t see how this couldn’t help me in the future. It’s just so awesome and easy to do and use.

My understanding of The Americans only changed a little bit. I had noticed how different Robert Frank’s essay was compared to the ones that the class took, or the father photo essay, it wasn’t really focused on just one subject. It was focused on the entire body of America. I learned Robert’s history and what he was surrounded with as a young adult and it made me think about how it all influenced him to take these 83 photos. The most frustrating part of this inquiry was the looking for the right information that would explain one of the leads from the first essay enough to tie up that loose end. Sure there was a lot of information that is circulating around about the different influences and ideas that Robert Frank had, but that would just be taking an idea from another writer who researched a similar topic. I wanted to see for myself and think for myself about his influences and life and ideas.

Inquiry Two

Robert Frank first viewed America from his home of Zurich Switzerland. He saw the glamorous red carpets and the flashy celebrities, so why didn’t he focus on the picture-perfect superstars just like everyone else in the 1950s? I believe that it was because Robert Frank was raised in a completely different society with different priorities. With multiple influences and a different mindset than most photographers, he began his essay The Americans.

Switzerland was a completely different place compared to the United States after World War I and during World War II. This period in time surrounded Robert as he grew older and built him to who he became. He lived in a country that wanted to remain neutral but still had to be prepared for war. His family was a wealthy Jewish family who felt the constant oppression from the Nazism that surrounded their homeland. Frank also had to deal with seeing the rest of his country struggling to survive the harsh economy. Photography was a way to escape from the pain, the oppression and the suffering all around him. To Robert and many other victims of the wars, America was a big deal, a well-known superpower of the wars and their people appeared to be thriving unlike any other country during the war. I believe that Robert wanted to find out what the U.S. was really like underneath the glamor.

A huge influence that would have been surrounding Robert from birth would be an art form known as Dada or Dadaism. Andre Breton, a famous French writer and poet, stated that “Dada is a state of mind…Dada is artistic free thinking….Dada gives itself to nothing…” (4). Dadaism is based upon the horrors of WWI. Artist turned from rationality, reason and the standards of art to “prizing nonsense, irrationality and intuition” (3). They were protesting the barbarians of logic such as the Swiss government only focusing on defending the country when the people were dying of starvation. Robert was living in the very center of Dadaism; it all began in Zurich just a few years before he was born. He would have been surrounded by artists claiming that the non-traditional is better to show what a person is really seeing.

Frank’s The Americans was first thought of as a “harsh, difficult reading” (1) and it was because the American people did not like that Frank was focusing on them, the real Americans. It wasn’t a “cherubic buoyancy of Steichen’s “Family of Man” exhibition” (1) like every other photograph essay of the time. It was something real and so rational that it was thought of as irrational. I believe that Robert took Dadaism in a similar but also different direction. To many European countries involved in the world wars, America was this untouchable and perfect nation that seemed to radiate glamour and success and just awesomeness. It was like a modern day fairytale to the people who witnessed horrible things. But Robert Frank went underneath the skin of the country to see how the entire body worked. He took what everyone believed to be the standards of American living and showed off what it was really like. Robert was the one who actually opened the eyes of the rest of the world to what America was really like and to the world it was a crazy, irrational and unacceptable idea.

Robert Frank’s biggest influence was that of Walker Evans, an American artist. Evans was very much a nobody in the eye of American artists and art-lovers. Evans had a small show around the time he was hanging out with Robert Frank in 1956, but that was after his biggest show that was held at the Art Institute of Chicago. He respected Robert Frank and also respected his work; so much that he helped Robert to apply for the Guggenheim Fellowship, which was the “scholarship” that supported Frank throughout the making of The Americans. There have been many similarities between the two artists and their photo books; such as the number of photographs, the print color, and the format of the pictures and even the size of the book (1).  Evans is thought to have changed the way that Robert Frank took his pictures. The pictures that Frank took earlier on, while in Europe were radically different than when he was taking pictures with Evans.  They looked like French photographer Cartier-Bresson’s photos from the decade before.

Henri Cartier-Bresson had fundamentals that he would follow as he took his pictures. He liked to focus on geometry, use only one lens, use lots of photos from different places and of different people, he did not use cropping, he waited for a perfect shot, he also liked to be unobtrusive or inconspicuous to his photo subjects. It appeared to me that Cartier-Bresson framed his photos towards a happy image or something that was interesting. He “framed” them, they were still spontaneous but they always had a perfect shot of something. Robert Frank still shows some of the influence that Cartier-Bresson gave him in The Americans as he takes pictures of subjects that don’t really seem to be paying attention or who find Frank as he is snapping the picture. Henri was a pioneer in “street photography” which is a form of photography that catches a moment in time. Like when a camera takes multiple shots in an action sequence, then the photographer picks out the best one. We heard of Robert Frank’s loads of photos and how he cut it down to only 83, this is an influence directly from Cartier-Bresson. Taking photos randomly allows the photographer to have a story to tell his or her audience but without anyone knowing the details of why the subject was there or what their background was. Just like the elevator girl, we don’t know why she was in that elevator or what she was thinking about that could give her such an emotional face that Robert caught in the reflection.

The photography of Walker Evans is also reflected in The Americans. His form of photography is still a branch off of the street photography that was made popular by Henri Cartier-Bresson, but at the same time, it was different. Evans didn’t try to frame his photos in any way. He snapped the camera at things that a person would see throughout everyday life. His photography was described as “puritanically economical, precisely measured, frontal, unemotional, dryly textured, insistently factual, qualities that seemed more appropriate to a bookkeeper’s ledger” (7). This is where we can see a huge similarity between Evans and Robert Frank’s photography style. They took photos of the normal people, of what an average person could see any day of their life and not be surprised or have a moment of awe. They wanted their audience of average people and other countries to see that there is beauty and glamor that is in the lives of the average American.  Both of these photographers received similar comments on their photo essays, they were both taken pretty harshly by the public but were later on recognized for their brilliance.

During my research I was able to see how Robert Frank first viewed America from his war and poverty stricken home of Switzerland. I could see how America seemed so drastically different to him and other countries. Since Robert Frank had so many different influences than those of other popular photographers during that time I believe that with these influences Robert
Frank was able to capture the true image of American life.

Inquiry One Reflective Letter

This paper was different in the fact that I was not allowed to just write it and send it in. I had to draft, and redraft and critique others and think way more than I am used to for every other paper. Usually I read the piece that I’m supposed to write about, then I rant and rave for a few pages and that worked for me (for the most part). It’s not that I don’t like thinking about the piece and my honest to goodness opinion of it, it’s just that if the drafts aren’t an assignment then they don’t get done. I might revisit my paper right before I turn it in to double check for whatever nonsense I might have added. I think that the most important thing I learn in revising is that my madness needs a method or at least some kind of linear way to follow to make a point that others can understand.

I like peer response. I used all of their advice because they understood that it was a (very messy and unorganized) draft and they just wanted me to clean it up more. They both enjoyed my different viewpoints and thought I should elaborate on them more in order to show the reader my thought process. Close reading was important in this essay. The Love of my Life printed off in 3 sections and I had to read through multiple times to attempt to find all the evidence I needed. I mainly used the first and beginning of the second because they had the most about suffering and how Strayed felt about it. She made claims that made it easier for me to agree or disagree with, but I had to really look for them. The most rewarding aspect of this paper is the accomplished feeling I have after sending in my rough draft to Prof. G. I feel like I made good points and since others agreed with me, it really feels nice to have some back-up. The most frustrating was worrying that I wasn’t going to be able to crank out all these rough drafts on time and that they wouldn’t have made any sense. I’m used to working on my paper a little at a time and not having people checking to make sure I was following the plan to get it done.

Inquiry One

The Love of my Life, Cheryl Strayed idolizes her dead hero, her mother. Instead of following the conventional and “famous five stages of grief” Strayed renews her life exactly the way many mothers would not have wanted her to. In many situations like this, the victim should be able to lean on others for help, but Cheryl sees her stepfather erasing her mother’s memory and cannot accept help from anyone else. She pulls the entire burden of her mother’s passing onto herself since it appeared to her that no one else would.

Denial, anger, bargaining, depression and acceptance are the five stages of grief. Everyone knows them and everyone has put them to use in one way or another. They are the closest way we have to a textbook method of recovering from a significant loss. Strayed states in her essay that “we don’t bear witness to grief” and we don’t. “The burden of loss is placed entirely upon the bereaved, while the rest of us avert our eyes and wait for those in mourning to stop being sad”. This is the sad truth about the society that we live in. We don’t want to help those through their pain. We tell them that we will always be there if they need us, a shoulder to cry on. But as soon as the pain and suffering come, we hesitate on the sidelines because the game looks tough and we don’t want to get involved or defeated by the overwhelming grief that is all around. If they think like Strayed did, that they are unable to live without this person in their life, then “we call their suffering a disease”. We really don’t understand how to help them through this process. We only know the five stages because that is what has “permeated our cultural consciousness” and we are uncomfortable and confused by the fear of being involved with someone who won’t or cannot follow those five stages.

Many of the people that first surrounded Strayed after her mother’s death wanted her to move on. Like good friends and family should do they wanted her to keep her mother’s memory alive by celebrating her life and accepting her death. Yet Strayed saw it and acted differently. She states that “we act as if all losses are equal” yet she feels strongly that they are not. I believe that losing a person is any form of them never going to return your texts, calls, or emails, that they will never be the same person again, or that they are gone. Strayed also says that “every emotion felt is validated” and I agree with the idea that “it is un-American to behave otherwise”. People do feel like they cannot live without their significant other and some will even commit suicide because they cannot continue to live. Does this make it right in society’s eyes? Absolutely not. Does it make life bearable for them? Yes. So should society really be concerned with who we allow into our “boat”; the small opening we have in our hearts for only those who mean the most to us? I do not think so, it is none of their business and it’s definitely not their call on how we should act if they choose not to come or die before they can board.

As many people do when they lose something or someone, Strayed pulled the entire weight of her mother’s death on her shoulders. She may have been able to keep her life if others had seemed interested in keeping her mother’s memory alive. Her stepfather had a new family, and they “moved into my mother’s house, took her photos off the walls, erased her.” If he had maybe shown more sadness and maybe a hint of respect for his wife of ten years then maybe Strayed wouldn’t have felt like she had to take on the entire burden of her hero’s memory. I agree with Strayed that he should have been the one who was suffering the most; she was his wife for goodness sake! He should have been so upset that he felt like he couldn’t continue to life, that his existence wasn’t worth much without her and it should have been his life that was turned upside down because of her death. It shouldn’t have been left on the shoulders of her daughter. If adults know anything it should be that their children shouldn’t have to face the harsh, cold and cruel facts of reality all of the time. It’s the same reason they tell us that there is a Santa Claus or that our hamster ran away instead of making us face the fact that Christmas is really just a surviving holiday because of human greed and really Dad just forgot to feed him while you were at summer camp. Children are their children, no matter what age the parent or child is. Ultimately what Strayed’s essay shows is that the entire unit that surrounded a person in death needs to continue to be there for one another until they are positive that every person in that unit is ready to move back to their previous life.